Reviews for Blurring Values
Flaming Sun of Illusions chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I loved it! That describes a teenager's life pretty well, actually. On the thirteenth line you need to add a d at the end of an, but everything else was really good! I have had days a lot like this poem, unfortunately, but you worded this really well! I love how you showed it as a blur, because that IS what it is like!
TinyLaughALot chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Awesome! I enjoyed this even though I hate whoever invented poetry right now! Keep it up!