Awesome story! I was upset at first that it didn't work out between Lily and Daniel but Kei is way better. Now I'm wondering if Lily's best friend Cassie is hiding the fact that she's upset about Lily leaving her and flirt with Kei. I think Kei knows better though :)

I love your story. Your such a good writer. I've been waiting for ages for you to update a new chapter, but you haven't, so I hoped writing this review would encourage you to keep writing. I'd love to see where teh story line is goine, so please keep writing, because its amazing :D

I absolutely love this story ! I've literally stayed up at night to read it ! It's sooo good and I really want to read more:)

Hey, was just on a 3 hour bus drive and your story kept me great company. I read it from start to chapter 17 and I must say I love it. I love how you right the story, and you make it feel very real. Can't wait to read on, because I love the plot. It'd be sad to think theres only a few chapters left, so I hope you can drag out the story line to have more chapters. I have a really good sense of who the characters are cause you describe them very well. Continue writing because you're really good :)

Cute chapter! I think you should definitely mention Adam more. ;) I loved seeing Kei jealous. Also, Cassie seems like an interesting character. Update soon. And great job! :)

Looove it update soon

Aw, that's cute. Cassie reminds me of my friend. :3

AMAZING chapter to be left with! I just love all the characters and the cuteness and ARGH! I was wondering when her old friends would come in! I thought it was kind of odd that they never came up before, but you made it obvious that she had been neglecting Cassie. :( I absolutely loved seeing Cassie and even Adam! I think this might be my favourite chap so far. OR! OR!... Their first date! Sooooooo ca-UTE! You can tell that I like the story because I'm getting super animated in stuff! Happy stories make me giddy! I really like how this story revolves more around the friendship and romance rather than the high school drama crap. And I don't know if I should say I was or wasn't surprised that their parents took it so lightly. They seem like the type to okay with it, but still... There has to be something big in this story and I can see it being about the 'missing parents'. This is like a mile-long (like I warned it would be), but I'm not done yet. I'm going to bet a bunch that Adelaide and Lily are related, right? You obviously distracted us from it since like, the second chap so now it'll be all the more surprising! Maybe half-siblings? Has Lily even met Adelaide's dad yet?

Okay, I'll stop now. I'm rambling. Apparently just like how Lily does when she feels strongly about something! ;) This is the longest review I've ever written... Huh.

I'M SORRY I HAVEN'T REVIEWED! I seriously did want to, but I also wanted to just get on to the next chapter! Plus, I would've ended up commenting every time though, and that would be annoying. :/ I opted for just giving you an uber long review on the last chap and the asking you to update soon like a good little reader... And now I just spent all this time talking about why I didn't review, which just makes me sound stupider to say that Kei's middle name is supposed to be Andrew, not Louis...

Ahhhh LOVED IT! :D
Cassie seems awesome! Haha Adam :P Kei was so jealous.
Please update soon! ;)

Amazinggg! Make more!

Awwww LOVED IT SO MUCH! Adorable as usual, and I can't wait until we find out where he taking her!

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Aw Kei. You're to cute.

Awesome! If only there was a Kei in my life.. 3