Reviews for Psychosis
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This makes me feel for the speaker because they, in all honestly, must be living in a nightmare. The imagery would rival that of an artist and well I don't know why but it made me think of your previous poem Cutting The Ties; the person who was left flailing after the girl when she left go. Maybe this was how they grieved or are grieving her. A heartbreaking poem but as always with you, a beautiful one.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I loved the way you told the nightmare like a story and although sometimes waking up after a series of events is often cliche you managed to make this appear original. Another brilliantly unique piece.
Great job!
True Talker chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Reading this makes me feel for the one who wrote it. As in she DOESN'T want you to be alone. She wants to be by your side. SERIOUSLY.

Reading this also had made me think.