|Reviews for Fate Chose Her|
| yoayio chapter 5 . 8/12
This story has a great plot and could go for very interesting turns. The characters in the story however act immature and juvenile. Evie is out of highschool yet acts like a middle schooler. Jayden is waaay too passive agressive for a leader much less an alpha werewolf. I say this to give you constructive advice, not to be mean. Adding maturity in your characters will give a lot of depth to your story. Evie's over the top attitude, especially, takes away from the plot.
| Yui Nightcore chapter 4 . 7/9
Please update soon! Love it! Please don't go on hiatus again! Ever!
| Littl'Red chapter 4 . 7/9
I really do love your story!:) you are an excellent writer, I just wished that you would update more often.:) I wonder how Jayden will drop the bomb on Jazz or if he will at all.. And I hope that Evie can make it through an entire day with Austin I mean there may be another dude, but when we red heads get mad, nothing can stop us:) Have a nice day:)
| TooLazyToLogin chapter 4 . 7/9
Ugh. I do not like Jazz. Can we have another love interest for Evelyn? Just to give Jayden some competition ;)
| RomanceObsessed chapter 3 . 5/21
Interesting chapter, can't wait to read more.
| Littl'Red chapter 3 . 5/20
Awww haha:) I enjoy this story Evies dialogue cracks me up and I like how she already knows she's gonna regret this in the morning haha:)
| xdxp chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
This sounds like a really good beginning for something really interesting. I hope you continue!
| RedXButterflyXBlooming chapter 2 . 5/16/2013
Oh man! Please write more! I want to know what happens next?!
| Latinoprincess chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Love it! Can't wait for more!
| Nami98 chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Aww man. I was looking forward to this :( its okay, ill wait!
| Hoshi Hinouichi chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Keep writin pleeeeeease ヾ(＠ー＠)ノ
Such a good story to start off with, u must continue!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!
| Alaeryel chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
OH BLOODY SH**! Girl-PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS STORY? There is NO WORDS to explain the THRILL AND EXCITMENT I got out of this! I will cut off my right arm for more! YOU HAVE COMPLETELY STOLEN MY BREATH AND HEART ALREADY IN JUST THIS ONE CHAPTER! I WILL DEFINITELY BE JUMPING AND BOUNCING FOR MORE OF THIS STORY!
| Jinuben chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I like the store so far please up date soon.
| Clouded and Instincts chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Can't wait to see what you do with this story! Nice chapter!
| mydreamadventure chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
omg wow! this was so unique and interesting! im interested to hear more from you! but how old is she, does she have any other family, whos Paul etc. I kind of want more back story but not too much, haha, but i
enjoyed this im excited to hear more keep it up :)