I have this feeling Ares and Tarvos will be new enemies for Dante soon.

Who is the person that Lannad was talking to at the end of the chapter? I want to know!

There was a lot going on in this chapter. I really liked how you intwined characters and stuff. Love this story!

Poor Lannad. I feel so bad for her that she got rejected by Dante.

yeah i am def glad that dante said no to her, though this chapter had me a little on edge. just wow, and tarvos and ares are plotting something. wonder what it is they have in mind for poor dante. also who was the person hugging on lannad at the end of the chapter?

It's nice to see Ares and Tarvos doing lovely sex things. They actually have grown on me as a couple, but I'm not so sure about picking on Dante. It seems wrong, despite the fact that I can see why Ares does it. Great chapter!

Welp, there went Lannad's possible coupling with Dante, but who was comforting her by the tree?

Tarvos and Ares are just evil. I can't believe Tarvos is going to backstab Dante for Ares.

Man you're mean not telling me who that person is that's comforting Lannad. It also looks like Tarvos and Ares have this evil plan, but I wonder what it is.

Holy cow, this chapter was sexy. I love Ares and Tarvos' new found relationship. I wonder who that figure is that comforted Lannad. You left off on a bad cliffhanger.

I wonder what faver tarvos and Aris have.

Aww. . someone is comforting Lannad after her heart was broken.I have a bad feeling about Ares and his death factory! Poor David, he wants to tell Oz his relationship with Dante, but he can't. Also, oh boy is he curious. Otherwise, awesome chapter!

Wow! So Tarvos is a demon! I didn't see that coming. I do wander why he has one demon wing and one angel. Cant wait to find out! Reminds me of Sepheroth. I like your writing style a lot. And Tarvos is a very interesting character. The flashback sequences were also a nice touch. Had me really wondering about his past. When i first started reading this chapter I thought you were going to pull an M Night Shyamalan twist and have Rezzi be a murderer or something. Goes without saying that what you had was a thousand times better! So far this story is amazing and amazingly written. Cant wait to read more.

Good chapter! Tarvos and Ares are planning something bad for Dante. Lannad was heart broken; it felt so sad. you can tell she was in loving with him. Plus, Oz is starting to have those feeling for Dante. I can't for the next chapter.

Hi! Well, Let me tell you about this chapter... Oooh boy, I really like the way you write my friend! This is how a prologue should be done. Just enough creative description to let the reader visualize the state of this world. I was imaging a dark semi-futuristic world. Skys black with industrial fumes and poor segregated from the rich and powerful. It honestly gave me chills reading it, like seeing a teaser trailer! My siblings and I have a story up and we could really use your reviews. I feel we could learn a lot from your writing style. You have a fan! :)