This chapter was even more haunting than the last. Your imagry is amazing, characterization astounding and story beautifully haunting. This is by far the best story I've ever read.

Wow. This chapter was amazing. All that action and horror elements. The Grand High Messiah is so creepy. I wonder what will haooen next. I also like the parts,with NexusJunture and David.

So much happened in this chapter. Dante and Tarvos really make me laugh. I like David's comments too. Also, the fact that Dante can seeTarvos is weird but interesting. I wonder why. It's nice to see Twisted Land being threaded into things. I wonder how it ties together.

Dante and Tarvos are probably my favorite guys, though I like Ringo too. I also love Mae's energy and Rezzi's calm demeanor. Your characters are so interesting and your story really pulls people in.

A blind girl and an anemic demon. This is an interesting duo. I love how sarcastic Tarvos isand how developed your characters are.

So far, this has a lot of promise. I like Rezzi and Tarvos' characters and your writing is just beautiful. I'm going to favorite this.

I DREW A PICTURE OF OZ, (if that's okay) AND I PLAN ON DRAWING TARVOS (if that's okay)!

Ayumi died. I was half right. I wonder why Lannad is involved is she never played the game? Could it be that her religion is real after all? I'm still confused about the Grand High Messiah, but I wonder if Oz and Tarvos are both the same type of demon. I also bet that Oz is NexusJuncture and that David will feel like an ass for telling him about his feelings for Oz on the phone.

I look forward to your next chapter! I like predicting things.

Oz finally appeared. Things will get interesting now.

So, Oz finally appeared after the massacre. It seems that things are happening, just like in the more I read, the more wrapped up I get into this work. It's a very, very complex and interesting story. It actually needs more love than what it has review-wise. Your characters and situations are very complex and intriguing. I'm going to keep my eye on this story.

It seems Tarvos is just as inquisitive as the rest of the cast. It makes me wonder if he's a victim or he's playing it off. This whole chapter was...strange and intriguing somehow. I definitely want to know more about Twisted Land and even more about Oz and NexusJuncture.

Dante's reactions to Tarvos' true form are humorous, but it must be a stroke of bad luck that he can see him. It makes the story interesting when someone is preceived as the local mad man because of things like that. I also find NexusJuncture an interesting character. I bet he has more to do with the story than anyone could believe as well, especially if he works for Oz.

So far, I like Mae and David. I am also curious as to what role Twisted Land plays in this story. I have a feeling that it may be bigger than anyone in the story thinks it is. Sorry for the short review but I'm on a crunched schedule, and I owe a lot of people reviews. I'll give you better ones next time around.

I like how deep Rezzi and Tarvos are. This is only the first chapter and I managed to get pulled in by them. This is also the first story in which you had a character that was blind as a main one. You play her off well and you make her realistic and somewhat strong. I'm going to catch myself up on this work today.

lol some parts the story was really funny definitely when Rezzi admitted he does smell a little. Love it.