So...does this mean that Tarvos is or is not the Grand High Messiah? Man, this mystery keeps getting deeper. I wonder what Oz will show everyone in their final, real life session?

So, the school died and so did Ayumi. Just like the game said. Now we'll see who the Grand High Messiah is. Can't wait until your next chapter.

I was betting Ayumi would die. Marks one off of dead pool. I wonder who HauntingGallows and capriciouscarnage is.

So.. Oz is here and he's NexusJuncture...so then is Tarvos undyingDiscord? Btw love the way Oz looks, I always thought he'd be some skinny nerdy guy. Just human not an alien. This produces more questions.

It's so funny that david bragged about liking oz to oz . It's so funny to me. I feel bad for lannad though. Poor girl. I hope she'll be okay.

I really like Oz so far. This is a good chapter.

This was action packed! I was really on the edge of my seat! Update soon!

I like how ominous the chat is. I wonder who NexusJuncture and BerefHex are.

A very foreshadowing chapter, but I have to wonder who that Messiah is and what exactly it represents. Lannad said that it was like the god of death in her religion. It can't be Tarvos, can it? I mean, he's right there with Rezzi. I'm interested to see what happens next. This story really pulls you in and absorbs you into it.

This chapter is really interesting. The game and characters are coming together. I wonder what kind of session they will have. On to the next chapter.

I don't care too much for Mae or Ayumi. Mae's type of character actually grinds on my nerves a little, but I like David a lot. I actually wished I knew more about him. Ringo is also kind of blah and Dante seems like a typical badass character. I wonder how these sub characters will turn out.

Rezzi is actually a wonderful female character. She reminds me a lot of a blind Vespa from your Sacrifice story on your other account but more in depth. I like the budding relationship between she and Tarvos, and their deep conversations.

This looks promising so far. I can tell that your writing has improved greatly over your time away. I also like your opening characters, they are intriguing and dark. I'll go and read the next chapter now. This has me interested.

I'm a little confused. The Grand High Messiah looks like Tarvos...but Tarvos has never played Twisted Land. Rezzi seems like she knows more than she should and the explanation of the game is that the events will repeat in real life. That means Ayumi and Mae will die, right? Also NexusJuncture is an interesting character. I hope they meet Oz in the next chapter. I'd like some things to be cleared up.

I'm so excited! I FUCKING LOVE TARVOS! XD