did you enter new chatacters in that chat? They seem nee or at least a couple do. I laughed so hard at this chapter when dante was trying to get tarvos to admit he was a demon. Man that was funny. I can't wait until your next update.

Now I wonder why Dante can see Tarvos. Like how does he not have a special ability? His reactions were so funny though.

Your writing is masterful and vivid. I can see your characters perfectly as always.

I'll give my short opinion on them:

Rezzi- I believe she knows something. I think it's even out of Tarvos' range, unless they are both playing it off. The way she acts throws me for a loop because she morphs personas as to whom she's around. I am finding her to be my favorite character so far.

Tarvos- This one is a mystery. His character pulls me in the more you write about him. I find myself thirsting for knowledge on his race and his mannerisms.

Tony- He seems like the comic relief of the group. Sort of like your normal, friendly guy who looks intimidating but is really a cuddly teddy bear on the inside.

Dante- He's the raging, angry badass of the group. I don't have much of an opinion on him other than he's angry at the world, but I wonder why and what makes his personality type the way it is.

Mae- She's sort of typical. Clingy best friend whose attractive and bouncy. She's not my type of character.

David- Token cool kid character. Although I find him to somehow be complex. That bit at the end where he gives Dante and Ayumi a look, and how close he is with Dante in general makes me think that maybe there's an odd triangle there but I'm not sure. I wonder if he's the best friend who has a crush on his best friend and is secretly gay type? That's the vibe I get from him.

Ringo- I'm unsure, he's quirky and funny but I'm not sure what his point to the story is yet.

Ayumi- Just a background character for now. Not much of an opinion on her either. She seems the normal girl type.

I really like Rezzi and Tarvos. That duo has depth and interest. So far, anyway. Could they have a budding romance or a gory end?

I was away for the holidays so I haven't had the chance to catch up to this yet. Now that I have, I will go back and review these respective chapters.

You really have a grasp on your characters. They are engaging and personable. They are both mysterious at this point and I am intrigued by Tarvos. Those visions of blood and gore at the end makes me think he has malicious intent for Rezzi, then again they could blossom into a love interest between them.

Their personalities are complimentary to each others.

You have a unique approach to the demons of your world and you give light on the intricacies that most people don't pay attention to. Personally, I like how you set them apart and define them as not being human. Most people write them off as being like humans, only with more primal and taboo instincts. I can appreciate fleshing them out to the extent that you have.

This is very interesting so far. I like your new characters as well. I want to see more of this story.

I like the other characters you brought in. I wonder what flavor that Ringo will add to their colorful group. Also, I want their reactions when they meet Tarvos.

I wonder what David made that face at when he saw Ayumi hug Dante. Is there something between them? Or was there? I want to know more about Twisted Land, too. It seems like a cool game but it's disturbing that it's go realistic. I wonder if Lannad's prediction about the Grand High Messiah will happen and what the differences are between the in game and out of game one. So many questions for this chapter.

This story is so great. I just love your characters and they're so fun. I like Dante and David though they seem really close. Mae and Rezzi's interactions are cute. I really like Rezzi's and Tarvos' relationship.

I feel like Rezzi knows more than she says. Maybe there's a reason she found Tarvos. I want to see the deets about Twisted Land. I like Rezzi's friends. They're interesting.

This gets better and better. I really like this story.

I wonder what Twisted Land is or what it has to do with anything. I want to see what'll go down when they see Tarvos. I bet he and Dante will get along well...lol

I like the new characters. Dante is really cool, and I like how he and Mae fight over Rezzi. Tony seems like the level headed guy and David is the cool guy. I want to see what happens when they meet Tarvos.

i like your writing style, i really like it. It seems like im actually on the scene.

Greatfirst chapter. I want to see where it goes from here.

hai again! this chapter was really fun. i liked the two living under the same roof and trying to make it by. i guess i've always liked those types of anime too. the throw something weird into a normal situation ones. i sense something more sinister though. i kind of worry about rezzi and i hope she'll be ok.