This chapter definitely delved into more complex aspects of both characters. We come to find out that Rezzi is actually pretty unhappy with her existence and Tarvos has somewhat of a heart, although this could be seen as questionable because of his underlying motives.

I like the interaction between them, and I can see them forming a bond of some kind (whether it's romantic or not).

I also like your description of the demons and their complex system of relationships. Nice cultural differences between humans and demons as well. This chapter has brought many questions in the air and it leave me wondering what will happen next and what underlying motives Tarvos has for being there.

Great first chapter.

You really stir up the questions and define your demon character, setting him apart from his counterpart. I love how quirky and interesting you've made them as well. They are deep and the premise for this story is amazing. I find myself wanting to read more with each update.

Your portrayal of demons as aliens with different looks on the world is very unique. I like how you make them different from what normal people do.

This only gets better. It was a nice read before school, too. I love how Tarvos and Rezzi interact. I just wonder a lot of things about him now. He's so mysterious. I also like the way that your demons are set up, too.

This was a good firest chapter. I wonder why Tarvos is there and what he plans on doing with Rezzi. This is exciting!
By the way, are you going to update My Sister's keeper too? I love that story. I would like it if you would continue it.

You know what? I like Tarvos, but I like Rezzi too. I don't want her to die. Please don't make her die.

Now I really wonder about Tarvos and what he;s planning. That last bit of imagery that's going through his head leads me to believe that maybe he plans on killing Rezzi, but he's also somehow being super nice to her and letting some of his secrets out too.

I don't know what to make of things right now but you're doing a good job of pulling your elements together. Your characters are so wonderful, too and your description is just beautiful. I can't wait to see another chapter of this.

oh hai. I remember you telling me about this story when were taking class together. You showed me your other website where you write stories too and I liked Bloodstained Noble and Sacrifice. I hope you update this. I want to see where it goes.

this was very good. i'm pretty new to reading stories here, and this was the first thing i saw, so i'm pretty happy with what i found. i'm going to be saving this to my favorites and checking up on it every week. it's pretty interesting and i want to see where it goes.

Wow, I'm really shocked that this has so few reviews. It's really good. I want to read more.

I've missed you, and all of your interesting works. So far, I don't have anything to critique. Your character development is interesting as always and while I do have many questions, you have stated that the scenario will end up being explained as the story progresses. Since I have been a long time fan of yours, your works never ceased to please me.

This will be no exception.

So far, this is really good, and your characters are promising. I'd like to read more of this.

I am not signed in here.

Funny and embarrassing story, I lost my e-mail and my password so I can't leave you signed reviews anymore. I suppose that may be for the best since I was only here to specifically review your works. So far this looks promising, although short, it drew enough mystery in for me to want more and there are so many unanswered questions to ponder.

Tarvos: I think there is more to him than meets the eye. Is he an alien, or a demon of some sort. The fact that he has amnesia is also quite alluring. This character has a certain charm and quirk that makes me drawn to him.

Rezzi: So far, I don't have a distinguished opinion of her. She seems typical but I also believe that she may be near sighted or have little to no sight. It seems a little off that she'd accept him so willingly into her house. Knowing you I bet you have a reason why or a plot device I don't know about yet.

It's nice to see you back on here. I know how much you liked to write and share your stories with the world. Hopefully I'll be better about reviewing than I have in the past. My life and the kids just have been eating things up lately and you know how it is for me.

I'm going to actually stay faithful to this story. I want to see how it folds out.

I like this story so far. Please update it toon.

This was really good so far. Nice premise and I hope that there will be a nice chapter one to go with it as well. So far, this story looks interesting and I want to see what promise it holds.