|Reviews for Corridor|
| Bob Story Builder chapter 2 . 2/27
This was a neat little story. The suspense was executed neatly, and I admired Anna. She was an interesting character even though we (readers) don't know anything about her.
| A chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I really liked this story, but I was to lazy to review. then, I read your bio. You talked about how important it is to review. It was really convincing, and your bio was the reason I came back to review your story. Infact, after this, I am going to review stories with no reviews.
Your main character was alot like me. I like old clothes, old buildings, old items, old everything. I also love vintage clothes and history. If your character was 12 too, wed be nearly identical! This story was full of suspense, and kept me on the edge of my seat! Im a little jeulous of Annie. There arent many historical places in my neighbourhood. There IS a old mill from the 1860s, but I cant go inside and its kind of creepy.
This story was awesome, although I think its better as a oneshot.
| Krystal Rock chapter 1 . 11/6/2012