|Reviews for Cigarettes and A Lighter|
| pooki3 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Your poetry is amazing!
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
"Maybe we could look somewhere else
But there's no fun in smoking alone"
I personally think that "Maybe I could look somewhere else" would sound better in that line, because "we" would mean more than one person looking somewhere else, therefore not "alone". But if I've completely missed some underlying metaphor with that line, by all means, carry on.
| Naver chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Well.. Where to start. I love this poem with duel meanings! (always interesting )
I love everyline and the way the words are written.
This is great, I'll be looking at your other works too.
Continue to write. :)