Reviews for Watching television on mute
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I really enjoy reading your poems. It's like stepping into a new world that I have been living in. (I hope that made sense to you.)

My favorite lines were
"and how it reminds me of
your fading, disappearing footsteps"

I get such a sad image of every I love leaving me to drown in the sound of my screams.
True Talker chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This makes me think and why does this make me think? It makes me sad because I DON'T want to be fading from someone's life, from someone's memory. REALLY. I DON'T want to disappear from someone's life. I WANT to be in and a part of someone's life. SERIOUSLY I DO. REALLY. When I read this peom it brings sadness to my own heart. Why because I LOVE SOMEONE IMMENSELY. I REALLY DO. SERIOUSLY.