|Reviews for The Ocean Bride|
| darkworld777 chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I like how you space the story out over a long period of time. Most one shots are based in one moment of time or a scene or an hour, so to see a single chapterstory that could easily be encompassed over multiple chapters is an interesting element to include. I also like how you ended the story, as it feels like a tragedy and a romance at the same time, even though the ending is supposed to be happy in nature. No person should have to go through something like that, even though everyone does.
| seredemia chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Aah, I admire you for writing something that you would normally not write. I love writing fantasy too, but I enjoy putting romance into, and as a romance enthusiast, I really liked this story. So nope, no complaints or anything from me. I thought you did a good job :)
As this is a oneshot, I expected that the romance wouldn't be as in-depth as it would be in a story. Given the circumstances, I still liked how you developed Calla and Gordon's relationship. I kind of suspected that she would be a mermaid. It's nice how you made them fall in love, despite the differences in their personality and age. That part was sweet. Only criticism I have is that the ending seemed a bit rushed to me. Aside from that, it was a good attempt on a genre that you wouldn't normally write for. Great job :)