Reviews for Two Pills
Scribble Scribe chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Woah. Intense. And so totally deep. Love it :)
ThisIsRealLife101 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I love he idea between the last two stanzas. It's a deep thought that I enjoyed reading.
How long does it take you to write poems like this?
Naver chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I like the last two stanza's! though in another for some reason I dislike the lines "I cut with razors" I think you should state who you cut with razors or what. But that is just my opinion, you may wanted to leave it anonymous.. Anyway, continue to write. :)