Reviews for Orange
toto23 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
GOOD JOB SPORT IT WAS GOOD I MEAN I LOVE ORANGES U THOUGHT DEEPLY
musicfreak99 chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Haha! This Is hilarious! I love it.
SilverTintedMist chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
At first I couldn't see why it was so funny, but then I remembered that nothing in the English language rhymes with "orange". Ha, I guess approximated rhymes count. :)
Culinary Girl chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Okay the curse word was unecessary. And the poem needs a little more to it! NO OFFENSE! I'm the kind of person who speaks their mind i am just trying to help! Visit this .com maybe you will improve a little!
Naver chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Haha, I was reading this and was thinking "Where are you going with this." Orange.. Door hinge.. then I read the last two lines. XD Then I reread for 10 minutes seeing if it actually rhymed. (over and over)
Good job, I suppose! :)