|Reviews for Losing You|
| Leila Archer chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Wow! This poem is so visually pleasing! I love the words too. I think the strongest line in this is "For I can see clearly now/How long you've stood upon the bow.
I think that line holds a lot of power. The way the rythm starts to break at the end adds that much more to it, and I love jow the last line is a single word. I have to be impartial here though: I don't really like the all capital word YOU. It gives it a level of noviceness and detracts from the maturity of the poem. Italics would be a better way to emphasize that word. Great job!
| Naver chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Hmm.. the person chosing to abandon you and you accepting it. That is what I got. Good.. Continue to write. :)