Reviews for Welcome to my World
najat.omer.75 chapter 8 . 12/21/2012
I laughed soo hard
This is the best story I've read in a while
IWantMyMummy chapter 9 . 12/20/2012
I hope nothing bad happens to Vereo ... and where's the true love!? I can't wait to see them fall in love! :DDD
IWantMyMummy chapter 8 . 12/20/2012
Ermahgerd. Because I have no other word for it ... Bastet is such a TROLL! OMG.
IWantMyMummy chapter 7 . 12/20/2012
"Dean," I say, as we wind though the seemingly countless back alleys of the city of Giza. Yes, I named my new friend Dean. Because apparently, Ancient names are always hard to pronounce. "Where are we going? We should sail to Sparta. I heard the guys there are totally ripped."

OMG. I totally admire your skill at being able to send your audiences into fits of laughter. Teach me! LOL jk
But then, on another note ... Bastet, omg. That last line ... she'd better not force Vereo to sell her soul!
IWantMyMummy chapter 6 . 12/20/2012
LOL no problemo about long chapters, it provides more background info! :D
IWantMyMummy chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
Vereo HAS got some attitude ... And romantic scenes!? OMG! When!?
IWantMyMummy chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
"He has guts. And I assume they're over there in those canopic jars, used to store various internal organs such as the lungs and liver."

IWantMyMummy chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
Whoa. Vereo's got some attitude ...
IWantMyMummy chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
YES! Vereo agrees to help him! Unlikely heroine, but perfect! :)
IWantMyMummy chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
LOL this is a great story. Tickles my funny bone AHAHA. And it is so much like Night of the Museum. Except with a twist.
Breaking Sad chapter 9 . 12/20/2012
AHA My pleasure entirely! :D Because your story is just that awesome :D Vereo contradicts herself so much and is so sarcastic, it's actually sort of cute. ;) But wait. Ra does not exist in history any more!? So he isn't going back to Egypt after all? Wait ... LOL I'm sort of confused, but I'm looking forward to Chapter 10 to find out more about Ra! :D Update soon awesome writer! :D
Breaking Sad chapter 8 . 12/15/2012
Whoa ... so that was Ra's past. Hehe .. he seems more trusting than Vereo even. Still. They would be nice together! :D But how is that possible if he must return to his own time? :O But at least they see each other again! Do they like each other yet I wonder ...
Nami98 chapter 7 . 12/9/2012
She would sell her soul? Damn.

Update soon!
Breaking Sad chapter 7 . 12/9/2012
Oh no oh no ... Ra and Vereo actually traded places in time!? This is scary but I hope she saves him - preferably without having to sell her soul though ...
najat.omer.75 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I think your story is amazing so keep it up and I'll keep reading!
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