Reviews for Child's Play
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
The concept here is a fascinating one, and one that I quite like, despite the obvious morbidity of the subject. You've written it brilliantly, I love the metaphor of murder being a game! My favourite parts are most definitely "They threaten me with needles..." and "I'm always on my own/"Alone" I must be taught, the "teachers" that know nothing about my train of thought."

In one word: fantastic. Nice work :D