|Reviews for How I was Murdered by a Fox Monster|
| copyright chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
YOU ARE BREACHING CIVIL CONDUCT LAW AND OUGT TO BE ARRESTED AND THIS IS A MORAL WARNING STOP RIPPING ON DIRECTORS CREATIVITY AND TELL YOURSELF OFF YOU OUGHT TO BE SUED HOW HARD DO PEOPLE WORK TO CREATE THEIR PEOPLES COPY VOICES IN WRITING?
| Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
This was a very interesting introduction, one that probes me to look further into this story.
A strong beginning, with somewhat of a weak finish.
| Sir Scott chapter 10 . 5/31/2013
I'm glad to see that you have updated. The only mistake I saw was:
"Idiot Itsuki," *I* sounded like a fantastic nickname. *It*
| Saya123 chapter 9 . 4/16/2013
I am really liking this story when will you post the rest of it?! Thank you
| Sir Scott chapter 8 . 3/7/2013
He doesn't seem too stellar in his studying, but who is? Good update, I look forward to meeting the fox monster.
| Sir Scott chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
Pretty good chapter overall. I think I can guess what scarred his back, but I'll have to wait and see if it pans out.
| Sir Scott chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
Good update. It was kind of neat to see them use their powers. Keep up the good work.
| Paige Terner chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
YES! SWEET! I will get it! THANKS!
| Sir Scott chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
This chapter is really interesting and I would love to see it in a paperback. In fact, over the years, I have seen a lot of people say they are going to get something published in book, but no one has. The moral of this chapter is, be careful what you wish for.
| stripestiger chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
It would have helped if I 'd read this second chapter before posting. I'm just all about kitsune these days. Still intriguing me though
| stripestiger chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Is this a kitsune or a nogtitsune I'mn betting nogitsune since it's all evil and stuff. I like this story so far, anything with beuatiful(if murrderious)fox women gets my attention:) Please write more.
| obliviousrahkshi chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
Six months for four chapters? Man, these means my stories is going to take years possibly but I have college work that gets in the way but I've managed to write three chapters in a really important book Scream for Truth: Beyond the Blackened Sun. Finally someone understand my turmoil as a writer with period of writer's block but always trying to surpass the what I've manage to do in previous chapter. Over all such simplicity yet it does great with a short story your trying to write here. Besides if this one of your first books there's always room for learning and growing!
| obliviousrahkshi chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
Ah flashbacks, both Holding for a Hero and Scream for Truth: Beyond the Blackened Sun have them prime example in how this chapter can flourish if you have the pursuit in creating a world so details your reader literally fall in. But the story has taken an interesting turn.
| obliviousrahkshi chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I remember I use to write like this so of the environment helps build up the emotions your character feels not just simply stating body language! I would probably expand this chapter in about five times its length not sure but nevertheless great job on what seems like a great starter book!
| morie-yama chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
Why does this remind me of blue exorcist?lol