Reviews for Float Away
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
OOOOOOOH so that's where the "balloons of nostalgia" came from! :0...

Wow this poem was so sweet and childishly romantic (3

So like a child with a balloon, to* careless to* soon.

-Misuse of to. **too.

I love this concept, although I don't get "golden strip". What does that symbolize, anyhoo?

This was so cute. Nick work!

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire
bloodandroses16 chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
I like this one.. The descriptions and imagery are amazing. A story is told with just a few short lines.. Wonderful:)

Keep writing,
b&r16
toto23 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
so good could i use this poem in school for a poetry slam?
Lizard1856 chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Thats a really good poem. It definitley describes how easy it is to float away or fade back to nothingness when you don't have anyone to hold you down to reality, to let you know that you DO matter, and you ARE important, and you ARE loved. In the shortest poem, you described/created a really big, really powerful, extremely relateable and absolutely BEAUTIFUL image. I LOVE IT! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
My Hidden Words chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
very nice. love the line with the balloon! Great Job
Film Addict chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I really like this one, I can feel that sense of letting go and growing apart. Well done.
Mistakes-and-Memories chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Aww :D This is so amazing and sad! I love it!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I liked this, you have some great imagery and I liked how the lines were split into two parts by the commas almost emphasising the changes in line. A really good piece :-D