Reviews for Death Wish
Ocean Krystal chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
OMG! This was radical, Marie! Best chapter yet!

I like that detective, Ms. Madison. Her attitude is all like Girl Power! :D
Also the computer geek XD
I half expected Madison to tell him to shut up when he started talking about sprint

Anyways, this stowie is going great, so continue and stop at nothing!

I just wanna ask if you could describe more Madison's apperance if she appers in the next chapter.

So yeah. Dawn toda cachada! XD
Embittered Egg chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
... caught?
Embittered Egg chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Ohhhhh yesssssss hottie death.
/extreme guro fan
Embittered Egg chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
She sounds wonderfully evil.
Ocean Krystal chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Oh mi Dios, I love it! :D

I love how Dawn prefers seeing other's pain over her own, it makes her seem really 'sadistic'. (And I like sadistic characters, actually:) And how she views her life as non-fantasy movie/book related.

Overall, it was a really good prologue. A little short, though, but good. And I can't believe you used the word 'asshole' in there! XD

BTW, one last thing:

Your chapter name... yeah? It's spelled PROLOGUE. :p

Well, you've done good, Marie! Hope you know that!

By the way, I had to type that. TWICE.
Ocean Krystal chapter 2 . 11/14/2012
One word, sweetie:

CONTINUE.

:D
Ocean Krystal chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Oh mi Dios, I love it! :D

I love how Dawn prefers seeing other's pain over her own, it makes her seem really 'sadistic'. (And I like sadistic characters, actually:) And how she views her life as non-fantasy movie/book related.

Overall, it was a really good prologue. A little short, though, but good. And I can't believe you used the word 'asshole' in there! XD

BTW, one last thing:

Your chapter name... yeah? It's spelled PROLOGUE. :p

Well, you've done good, Marie! Hope you know that!
Felrain chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
Nicely done, keep it up!