Reviews for Lungs of Smoke
EbonyMoonShadow chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Beautiful sorrow. 10/10
BlameMyMuses chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
The imagery in this is simply amazing. The flow from line to line is fluid and perfectly matches the style, and especially the mixed emotions behind the theme.

You have a gorgeous writing style and there are so many lines that stood out but I especially loved this passage:


Used to say that they should build

Monuments to us because we were

Perfect but one night you said that we

Were monuments to everything that's

Wrong with the world and I fell asleep

Wishing to be anywhere but here."

Lovely piece.