Reviews for Snow Maiden
The Sewage chapter 4 . 2/12/2013
LOOOOOOOL
no im not sewageeeeeeee you know who i am yeah? yeah? yeah? anyhooooooozers
aww gwyneira :( aww but it's cuuuute see this is kinda cute fluffy romantic but not quite...almost there! i like it but noooo why did she have to melt awayyyyyyy
there was something i wanted to say but i totes forgot.
OH YEAH! yeah this chap is short but it doesn't have to be long since it's like the end and stuff and there's no point to dragging out an ending you know? anyways good job! i like this! :D
The Siege chapter 3 . 11/22/2012
GAH no time to log in gotta finish calc and lit but anyways
OOH LA LAAAAAAAAAA KISSYFACEEEEEEE ahaahhahahaa
Okay so some typos:
"I never even {though} of hurting anyone." Obviously should be "thought."
"Only when {your} dreaming can I touch you without hurting you..." Should be "you're."
"...{and} empty grave with an empty slab of concrete at its head." Should be "an."
Awww sad. :( Wait GREEN? oh noooes what happenedddddd
Nooo don't die Gwyneira!
;) UPDATE SOON ahahaha
The Siege chapter 2 . 11/15/2012
yoyo bro sorry i'm too lazy to login today :P i shouldn't even be on cuz i need to do apush like three hours ago but whatevaaa anyways
so like i like this. like a lot. :D every time i read something new from you, i think, "how does blitz even think of things like this?" they're just so...random. and...odd. in a way. but i like them! :D a lot! so update sooooooon
btw i was reading this fanfic (with kpop stars as the characters; lol don't ask) and almost everyone died. like literally like 2...no wait 1...wait...well whatever only a few main characters didnt die. seriously it was bloodier than a fucking shakespearean tragedy and it was really long and i hated most of the characters but it was also REALLY REALLY WELL-WRITTEN AND HAD AN AMAZINGLY CONVOLUTED PLOT WITH THE MOST COMPLEX CHARACTERS LIKE EVAR. SERIOUSLY. i was just like...wow. amazed siege is amazed. :3 but anyways i digress.
THIS WAS CLIFFIE-LIKE. WHAT HAPPENED IN THE WORLD OF THE WHITEBOARD. UPDATE SOON. LOVE YAAAAAA
The Siege chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
"...so with me being a loner an all" should be "AND all" haha typoooo
Soooo YOU WROTE IT. YAAAAAAAAY AND I LIKE IT JUST AS MUCH AS I THOUGHT I WOULD xD BUT THERE'S GONNA BE A CHAPTER 2 RIGHT? YEAH YEAH? OK GOOD
Anyways cool names bro. Gwyneira seems very fitting somehow, and Kieran...reminds me of the Scottish kid at school HAHAHAHAHA but anyways ;) I liiiiike muchoooooooooooo update sooooooon3