Reviews for Incandescence
cumberbarbie chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Hehehe this is so great! I love Fern(: But she's hiding something, isn't she? Mysterious! I like it(: Ah she and Mitchell are gonna fall in love, aren't they? I hope so! But I want to hear more with Ashlynn and Trent! :D They're gonna be meeting soon in real life, right? Or something like that... Goodness my memory is awful. I think the only way to solve this problem is for you to update more often! I know I would be happier...(:
BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
Who has got their hands on Fe-ern? I wonder who it could be. BTW: you take a ridiculously long time to update.
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
I need to go back in the story to find out why Fern allowed Andi to slap her... and why she then felt free to kick the crap out of Mitchell.

Now, since you've left us with a cliff-hanger, I am confident that right now you are typing the next chapter... in fact, you haven't even had time to read this review because of the feverish pace at which you are typing... I'm sure that you will post any minute now... (whistling)... (walking around the room straightening things)... (checking watch)...

Perhaps I didn't make myself clear? where did you mention that you lived? No reason! Really! (cracks knuckles)
kallawhit chapter 5 . 2/1/2013

lilly :)
blindly optimistic chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
Hi there...i like Fern, she's cool.

Uh...maybe mitchell turned her around? I dunno. crazy guess.

Ok, I promise I'll update mine on FF! I jus have SO MUCH TO DO and stuff.

And you finnaly update too. On your prifile, it said hopefully you'll get it done by Feb...its 2/1!

Ah ok so update alright? I'll update to.

Guest chapter 4 . 1/16/2013
WHAT THE HELL ashlyn? that was a dumb plan though...

ok, another mistake i found was on the 2nd text. You said "tren trin contest" when it was supposed to be "trenT trin contest"

Anywy, i have realized I sounded quite a ways like a b!tch in the previous reviews... sorry if you were offened by me correcting you...anywy, I want to tell you that this is a nice story & could go far.

i will check out lilly prescott adaria's work.

as of now...

DAMMIT just update already!

Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
oh yeah, I just remembered the mistake...sometime earlier, you said Ashlyn's eyes were a CERULEAN color... but then, at the lunch scene, you said "brown-colored eyes"...

oh yeah, and a star *****

Guest chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
ok chapter...but Ifound some mistakes...

First, u said "previous gifts" as the code, thn "yesterday's gft" wtf?

you also said something like (too lazy to scroll back up & look, long chapter) "she [something] at THE Ashlyn and Rebecca"...its not supposed to be a the.

and there was something in the lunch scene with Avery...,but i'm, again, too lazy to scroll back up and look for the mistake inthe jumble of words... but other than that, nice chappy :3
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16/2013
omg i heart megan &liz! I also like th VERY long chappy...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Um...ok then...on to chap. 2
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Ah, the joy of having siblings! All of Ashlyn's well-laid plans fall to dust and drift to the floor.
kallawhit chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Hey it's Lilly here! HolĂ ! I'm in ssssppppaaaaiiiin! Btw loved this part! Mitchell is adorable! I want to pinch his non-existent chubby... Big cheeks! I won't update in quite a while since I'm enjoying free vacation time in Spain! Feel free to ask questions about Spain AND Emmy's story! I haven't forgot her... Yet. (Cheeky smile) lol I nvr will forget her :):) she is my nearest friend in the whole wide world! Hear that Emmy? U r my bestest friend in the friend in the whole woooooooooooorrrelllld!
BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
I really like this story! I hope you update REEEAAAAAALLLLL soon because I can't get enoughof this story! It's so wonderful! (wipes tears from eyes)
blindly optimistic chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Hey! Could I write a song for you? Thanks! If I can!

Good chapter.

blindly optimistic chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Sounds promising.

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