Reviews for Lucky Low
Brian Sullivan chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I liked it. It was entertaining and fun to read. I liked how you fleshed out the characters. They were a little cliche, but you compensated by giving them personalities, which is surprisingly rare. I could see this as the first chapter in a book. I liked the fact that the climax didn't happen at the casino. The only problem I really had was that there wasn't much suspense. Keep writing!
AJ 96 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This is my return review : Well, this was funny! :P I liked it, even though I don't generally go for this kind of story. I would've liked to have some more background and descriptions though. But still, good job! :)