|Reviews for Berliners|
| DiaRose chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
This is really interesting. I think it could read with a better flow, and maybe if you cut some things that read kind of silly, like "I did not know this hunger..." things like that which are kind of melodramatic, then it would be really good. I have to confess I only read it because of the description, I would have liked it more if it were a little more subtle, because that would have been really creepy.
| Naver chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Hm.. this is not so lightly implied, but it was descriptive and quite grusesome to read.. Which is very good for poetry so continue to write. :)
Random note: I was thinking of posting a cannibalism poem, so maybe I will finish it up and post it later on..