Reviews for Haunting
Little Fellow chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Lovely, extremely lovely. The words flow beautifully to tell the story, and the sensory imagery is wonderful. I hung onto every word, hungering for the next line, it was a wonderful read. Lovely work!
toto23 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
i love this poem
Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Because of a past inside joke I cracked up when I read the poisonous tea part but I love the symbolism and the wording. This is veeeeery well written :D
Fierce Ookami chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
its so great it made me speechless
SilverTintedMist chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
I often compliment people on their imagery, but this was the prettiest so far. :)
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 11/17/2012

this is the first time I've ever read anything of horror on this site, and that was really nice! You have so many nice metaphours in it, and the rythm of the poem worked really well!
Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I like how all your poems are just the right length. You fit the length with the topic, well done.
I loved the questions in this and the descriptions, espicially 'See I can no longer walk, my legs a visual of true darkness.' Amazing :-D
Great piece!
Key Atlas chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
OMG! SO dark and amazing and awesome! I loved the beat of the poem!