Reviews for Porn
cherrycat chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Now, this one I REALLY like. I couldn't tell you why - other than that it's written phenomenally - but it really is a fantastic poem. That last stanza really hits you hard, paints such a vivid picture (not that I have ANY experience of it whatsoever) of that excitement, that haziness and weird sort of delight of being in bed together. And the comparisons between that happy situation of being with the one you love to the violence of porn is really really clever, and very subtly worked - "My heart punching hard into your ear, when my kiss could kick you in the mouth" is just such a glorious notion. Outstanding, love - you're outdoing yourself pretty much every time, and I never tire of reading your work!
Five-Princess chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Amazing Prose!
Purple Octopus Badger chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Well the first part was like "alright she's pretty cute", then the middle part was more "Okay I think I just saw down her shirt", then that last part was..."Her purse just fell and a ton of condoms and dildos fell out of it?".
Well done once again, your poem caressed my check with the back of its hand before punching me in the stomach, and while I gasped for air it handed me a flower followed my some tongue action. GOLD!
I really enjoyed the slow build up with the lists each one a hard hitting image that really sticks.