| Reviews for Jasmine |
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   Celest6 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006 Wow, that was a great story! I'm an avid reader of romance novels and I really enjoyed reading this. It was like reading a real book all the way through. I do enjoy not having to wait for authors to write and upload their chapters. Keep on writing!Britt Ps. I love the name Celest :D |
| minute-glass chapter 1 . 1/17/2006 wow. great story ] i almost didn't read this, but then i saw how its only a chapter. i really like how you put everything together ] nicely done! ok, now im off to read "my brother's keeper" D i love jerry's character ] |
| Silver-Dragon5 chapter 1 . 12/19/2005 A wonderful story! Couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. You set everything up beautifully - especially your characters. You did such a great job detailing them and giving each their own unique qualities. Congratulations on a great story! I'll have you read the sequal and some of your other stories. ~Silver |
| Heather F. C chapter 1 . 11/29/2005 aw, this is such a beautiful story, very well-written! can't wait for the next ones |
| clara12 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005 this is such a sweet and great story. i like how all the chapters are in 1 chapter, i just kept on scrolling down and down.. instead of waiting for the next chpater to load. but anyway, i really liked the story, it was realistic, funny and SO sweet with great characters! |
| shay chapter 1 . 10/24/2005 good story! good plot! great charachters! i think that the jasmine/joshua relationship is more lust than love... |
| Against Apples chapter 1 . 10/22/2005 great story! loved it! Kellie |
| awaitinglove chapter 1 . 9/17/2005 Great sTory! |
| Riku E. Fallon chapter 1 . 8/26/2005 Aw... Very sweet. You have a knack for creating a universe for your stories to take place in, and this story honestly felt like something I'd have to turn pages for (a real book). I liked it a lot. It was a little more dramatic than I'm used to, but Joshua was a sweetheart and Jeremy made me laugh. I enjoyed it greatly, thank you for a wonderful read, please keep writing. |
| Whimsical Rhapsody chapter 1 . 8/20/2005 This story is so fucking opulent.. I am quite literally speechless. It's just THAT good. It was realistic, and at the same time it was sort of utopic with the way you had it made into a "modern day fairytale". It's just so god damn good. *praise praise praise |
| Stars and Bright Shoes chapter 1 . 8/20/2005 This story is the best I have ever read, and I like your idea for a series...its just like those romance novels, but better because your story isn't chessy. I love the characters and the drama; only a wonderful writer like yourself could pull off such a story.I suggest that you publish this. I would totally buy it. I love your writing style, again. And I can't wait for more of the New Haven Series to come out...Jerry is so funny, and Josh is like the love of my life, lol. Bye, thank you for making such an excellent story so that I could read it. You made my day, I was searching all day for something good to read. |
| none chapter 1 . 7/30/2005 It's like a modern fairy-tale! Yay! |
| B.T. Lines chapter 1 . 7/28/2005 I loved this story. I'm glad that you published it all in one chapter, it seemed to flow really well since I didn't have to wait for each chapter to upload. |
| stupidsarah chapter 1 . 7/24/2005 Marvolous! Extremely extravagent and stunning, entrapping and captivating, descriptive and heartwarming, etc etc. Loved your story, it's amazing that you entered the whole entry such. I'm not sure if you just replaced as you went, or if you posted the entire thing in one sitting, but either way, it's a great piece. i have to admit, i loved jerry more then joshua. i guess it's just me, but i think he was way more charming, guess he's more my type huh? can't tell you how great it is, but keep it up! |
| SouledChampion chapter 1 . 7/23/2005 I loved this story; one of the bet romances I've read in a long time. :) |