|Reviews for Waiting For The Day|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Well, this is just true. The imagery is beautiful because it gets across passion as well as joy and freedom. Then as if a flip of a coin occurs the reality kicks in which sometimes isn't all that great. I wish I could insert exactly how great this poem is but like always you leave me speechless. Is it strange to see this so clearly in my head. And the daunting thing is, I only ever see one magpie. I have yet to see two. Maybe that's something in common I share with the speaker. Great piece. :)
| AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Personally I think it would be more dramatic if it ended with 'An then I blink' and would leave some mystery in the piece.
I loved the description of the bluish wings. Great job though, keep writing! :-D