Reviews for Who You Pretend To Be
HeyCharles chapter 1 . 5/2/2021
You can publish this in a mobile app so a lot of readers can see your lovely work. Check on NovelStar and see how other writers earn by pursuing their passion in writing.
AngelRiku chapter 16 . 5/20/2019
Oh my gosh! How dare she steal your story and claim credit! I will write on Amazon to warm people
AngelRiku chapter 17 . 5/20/2019
Hi! Greetings! Thank you for the update. I know you didn’t receive as much support for this story as you clearly deserve, I am one person from the mass that needs to inform you how much I loved this story. You are a great writer and I hope you keep up with more stories.
SilverRose chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
Sorry I don't have an account here yet, you're the first story I've checked out:) I like it so far! I think I know where you're going with Mouse's journal. I know its hard to write in such a depressing manner... sometimes when I write something particularly angsty for my story-book-thing (i may publish it here some day idk) I have to stop myself from believing the sad things I'm writing. That may just be me but don't let it get to your head:)
Nerdybird1999 chapter 16 . 11/9/2013
That stupid bitch needs to give you your story back!
MeribethSC chapter 15 . 11/2/2013
I love your story, is nice and simple and it has this other side of it, where you can imagine what could happen next chapter (through out the whole story). The only thing that I think it was kind of weir was the proposal. It maybe just me that I think it was weir she didn't notice. I think you could have done something better , but still is a great story. Keep up writing.

P.S: sorry about your story been plagiarize.
BrownEyedCutie99 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Love the black sheep reference.
Strangershadow chapter 15 . 10/26/2013
D'aww, I'm gonna miss this story :') It was like this constant, comfortable reminder that there are other stories out there that deal with suffering and have so much of emotions in them, and knowing now that it's done is like a punch back to reality, even though I knew this was going to be the last chapter.

BUT this was the perfect ending (and Epilogue) to a really awesome story. My congratulatory pats to Maddy-chan for the brilliant idea for the proposal :) I think you achieved your aim to write an epilogue which tells what happened but also gives space for us to imagine everything. I think your idea for the side story about Moses and the girl who later on becomes a nurse is pretty interesting.

I loved the "disgustingly in love" dialogue, it was so epic XD One of the really good thing about the proposal was that it was simple, but so unforgettably romantic. You know, there are some stories in which the author writes long, cheesy dialogues for the guy to say, to give out a whole speech- and for me that is too fake and dramatic. In my opinion, your way of writing the whole scene was so very real and much more emotional. I also liked the fact that the last scene, where you show her with her very own family, I can actually feel it. Your writing has improved over the chapters and I can see the amount of emotion put in them, so...yeah...*hats off*

I'm gonna miss Kat and Dylan. Congratulations for creating and successfully completing such a wonderful story :) And I'm so so sorry for the extremely late review . \
Nerdybird1999 chapter 14 . 8/10/2013
Love it plz do mre
Strangershadow chapter 14 . 7/1/2013
Oh man, this chapter gave me the chills! XD I loved every minute of reading it! Just...wow, you got me smiling like an idiot the entire time!

It's no problem, I'm glad you liked the idea and thought it was good enough to write the scene and add it in the story :)

First of all, thumbs up for Dylan and the Director! I was literally boiling with rage when I read the scene between Veronica and Dylan, and then the one when Gerard came in made me want to punch the stupid guy!

"Don't turn around..." He whispered, his breathing evening out. "I don't want to see how mad you are at me. Let me hold you for a little while longer, then you can yell at me all you want to."

- This paragraph was amazing and adorable. It's like no matter how long they've spent apart from each other, they still love each other so desperately that it makes you want to cry and smile at the same time. One of the cutest lines EVER! Oh and the "You're an idiot but I love you too." was also awesome.

You know one of the things I like best about your writing (and this story)? It's how it's genuinely so beautifully and innocently written. It's like after every chapter, the reader just wants to go hug the characters because they are so easily relatable!

Really well written and it'd be awesome to know what the sequel's about and if you're gonna write it or not. I look forward to more Kat and Dylan! :)

I rarely use so many exclamation marks in my review but your deserve it. Keep up the good work! And um...sorry the late review :P
lilacflower2 chapter 14 . 6/29/2013
Okay, I was going through the just in section of this and saw this one and was like "OMG! I FOLLOW THIS ON NOVEL JOY!" so I read it early xD Awesome chapter thank you for writing this story :D
Guest chapter 14 . 6/28/2013
YAAAY!
MeribethSC chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
I like the scene of the room, to me more precised when he hug her from behind, mmmm... made me go awwww. It was as you say "nice and simple" I like it.
MeribethSC chapter 13 . 5/18/2013
I wonder what she wants to do, right now I am trying to think what I want to do :-(. Anyway sorry I took so long to read this, now that I check is been only 7 days lol, I been busy with school :-(. So you only have one more chapter and that's it right? I wonder how your going to put everything together, also you could have make this story longer by putting a new guy inside the life of Kat, and when Dylan comes back he get jealous because the guys is been helping Kat get through everything in her life. Oh well am anticipating the last chapter. Is it one more or two more am not sure anyway FIGTHING!..
Strangershadow chapter 13 . 5/15/2013
That's so much like Kat- treating the situation in an optimistic way and still hoping for the best. I salute her for being so awesome and you for writing such a nice character.

The part of Dylan thinking about how he would have to kiss another girl actually made me chill a little. That's when I actually realised the intensity of the situation he was in, and how completely heartbroken he must have been. I'm also shocked to see so many changes happen in such little time with Kat, but I'm glad Vic left for the better. She must have so much pressure- from school and home, both.

Somehow, it would've been interesting if Kat had paid a visit to Dylan's room- seen how he lived, if there was any mention of her in any part of his room or anything.

I liked this chapter, you just keep on getting better and better. And I'd love to see an epilogue where you showed a scene of them after they become a couple :)

The only thing wrong with this chapter was that it got over too fast because I wanted to read more, which is why I can't wait for your next update! Take your time, though :)

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