Reviews for undone
Trinity Fai chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
I love this poem! I always have to pause between each one to think about it and it's like something plays out in my head almost like a sad movie. You write powerful words and I hope you never give up on that. X3
BMaddox chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Okay, so I read this like yesterday or something, I think, but anyway I really like this. The structure has such a powerful rhythm and I love that more than anything else about this poem. It makes me stop repetitively to think, to inhale...it's strong.

I also really like the diction. It's also strong. Connor's poems are always spectacular.