Reviews for Lights
aycha chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
The Review Game

I like the simile "laughing like delighted children at play." because it conjures a wonderful carefree image.

I also enjoyed the way the tone changes frequently, carefree, to melancholy, through bitter, to dreamy and so on.

I felt the last but one stanza needed more punctuation.

I hope my review is useful!