Reviews for Death of a Toothpick
musicfreak99 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
This is awesome! I love the subject, toothpicks! What a great idea!
RedX9 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Good job here!
I never imagined a story using mundane things like toothpicks. Its a witty story to be the least. However with that said, I think you could have done more to the piece. Well you only talked about the good things of a neglected toothpick; how about the negative side of being neglected; since you already added in human interactions to your subject if you know what I mean.