Reviews for Maybe I Should Stay Here
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
I was looking forward to reading your work all week and I knew I was in for a treat. But this sonnet, wow, it knocked me sideways with amazement. I quite like the concept and the way you present it is like a carefully crafted story and it's brilliant because the imagery is so detailed and so beautiful that I can feel goosebumps raise on my arm. It's fantastic and I wish you could teach me how to write sonnets as good as this. Fantastic! :)
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Nice to see another sonnet, I think they are my favourites of yours. I loved the lines 'Mere threads for Death's cloak, like ink from the pen. And misled fables none or few believe.' Really good.
As always, keep writing! :-D
Naver chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
The last two lines are my favorite. Joining a war to fight for anothers cause or maybe this poem is something much deeper. Interesting..
Continue to write. Sonnets? Always good. :)