Reviews for your voice
ygg chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Sometimes we drown in the ripples of so many others.. Good work!
classic violet chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Archia chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I think this could be really ambiguous and mean a lot of different things and I really like how it appears like that. It was really good.
Pzychotic chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hey! I just got back from Vegas and I'm sort of hyper even though I'm underaged and couldn't really do anything!
Well, I have to admit I'm not good at reading Haikus. But here is my visualization of your poem: so there are two pebbles being skipped side by side. One of them skips at a different rhythm, and the different ripples causes a discord in the pond and causes the other one to lose its skip and drown. It's like a symbiosis gone wrong. I'm not sure, but that's what I see.
Enjoy your Thanksgiving,