Reviews for Convergence
Petra Arkanian chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Wow this is good. Like, really good. I love everything about it - except the capital letters and the swearing, but eh. This is probably the best story I've read on FictionPress before. Your writing style matches the character so perfectly, and I love the character, and I love how to portray him. I love the idea, I love the creepy nerd - because it's so true because most real nerds are really creepy! You use sentences wonderfully; the best part was definitely the "Pop. Smack. Chew." repeated over and over again. All the characters are so original and the pacing is excellent. I'm so glad I stumbled across this. Definitely subscribing! Keep writing!