Reviews for THE HEALER
Mwomnom chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Hey, I really liked the start of this story.

I always envy people who can write as freely as you do in first person, since I just can't! xD Whatever, I don't get to make this all about me. There have been some grammar mistakes and the occasional spelling, but hey, I make some of those too, hehe. I would recommend you use a spellchecker or something? It's fast and easy and ought to improve the quality of your piece. Just saying. :)

Anyways, these not-so-significant techincal notes aside, I really do like your manner of writing. I'll stick around and see what happens next!

The Undecisive Thinker chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
bookppl93 chapter 8 . 12/29/2012
bookppl93 chapter 7 . 12/27/2012
Oh wow... Drama.. And I think you should have someone look over you story because I saw some mistakes.
bookppl93 chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
bookppl93 chapter 5 . 12/9/2012
Mindblown... Wow.. That's very intense
bookppl93 chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
bookppl93 chapter 3 . 11/26/2012
Its *follow not fallow and haha my name is Audrey :) nice chapter if u need any help u can ask;)
bookppl93 chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
I think I'll stay with this story :)
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
I see why the war was caused. It makes sense. But poor people .
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Hmm its good, but re-read to catch some mistakes you made.