|Reviews for There's Only a Thin Line Between Love and Hate|
| Sanddagger chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
I really like this kind of story; two normal people having normal encounters and conversations that are funny and meaningful.
I like a lot of dialog in stories but i must agree with (Lizzie'sFanFictions) it can be difficult to tell who is talking. I would suggest matching the person doing the action in the paragraph with the person speaking.
I'll admit it was very fast paced. It took her very little time to realize she was falling for him in the very first chapter.
I also got confused a lot during the italicized quotations but that might just be because I've never used that style of writing.
Overall it is a very cute and heartwarming story. Props for writing this in 8th grade.
| Infinite Legend chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I like it and shit you're only in 8th grade? That's really good then.
| Lizzie'sFanFictions chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Aww this is cute:) Love how Caron is such a flirt. My only suggestion is that when they go back and forth talking a get a bit confused on who is saying what. Try to throw in a 'said Caron'. Good story:) Cant wait for next chapter!
| Bookworm67 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
it seems really interesting so far! I am excited to see where this goes! :)