Reviews for Going Cold
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
This is so tragic, and brilliantly done.
Gold star for brilliance.
Valenteen chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
The story behind this poem is tragic, romantic and full of crushed hope. I love this and everything about it. Keep writing more of these- I love them all!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
The imagery is fantastic and really grips me, especially when you use 'you'. The imagery is intricate and detailed with the last night being particularly poignant. This sad tale is haunting but beautiful and I think one of your finest. Superb piece as always! :-)
Naver chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
The last two lines are the perfect close, this is a very sad tale. You tell it very well.:)
HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Beautiful, really beautiful in a sad way, but it's so good. An amazing piece, great job :)
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
The imagery here is startlingly beautiful, I especially loved "stretched out fingers wrapped around mine" and the four-line section in the middle where you revert to a loosely fixed rhyme scheme was also a favourite part of mine. Nice job! :D
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This is hauntingly beautiful :') thank you again for another wonderful piece!

Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This poem is so heart wrenching. The idea in itself is powerful.
I love this though it is very sad. Great job.