|Reviews for Gone|
| The Allyphant chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Horrific in all the right ways. You easily gave the dark feeling in such few words, and I'm mesmerized about how happily ironic the person was. The short, quipped sentences add well to the train of thought of the person, and really, there's nothing more interesting than the human mind. ; )
The only clincher that really cut the mood for me was near the end, when you began to describe the bathroom and the blade. This is just my personal preference, but I really enjoyed it when you didn't uprightly tell us that the narrator had been cutting. It allows the reader to fill in the holes themselves, but they can only accomplish that by mulling over the words. And that's how you find a better satisfaction out of reading something, hee!
Overall, though, it was a great and definitely depressing story that was well worth the read! Bravo!