Reviews for Athena (Book One of the Athena Trilogy) |
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![]() ![]() The Book should have a time where the villain grabs out his hooker blade,A knife you keep in your anus. 8/10 at worst |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU GUYS SO MUCH THIS IS THE BEST STORY IN THE UNIVERSE I CAN'T WAIT FOR BOOK TWO! MIO DIO THEY KISSED I'M THE HAPPIEST HUMAN EVER. Excuse me while I explode in fangirly goodness 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome epilogue here! I loved Owen and Richard's scene at the end. They finally admitted their feelings! Their friends are going to tease them for a long time, though... XD |
![]() ![]() (Too lazy to log in XD) Awesome chapter! I really really really- *tons of really's later* LOVED IT! XD, I seriously can't wait for the finale! *cue epic squealing* It's be thrilling! u |
![]() ![]() Yesssssssss! More books! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy belated birthday! Anyway, this was a nice chapter. Lots of dialogue, and we can see Owen and Eric's relationship bud little by little. Also, are you going to move onto the next part in the trilogy after you finish Athena, or are you going to take a hiatus? Delta327 |
![]() ![]() LF1: yay an update! :D lol glad to see the new chapter up, good job girls! I think it's funny that Erics kinda a douche XD can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What does the dream mean? Sounds interesting! Also, I wonder when Owen and Richard will admit their feelings for each other...XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon mon ami ** And put more Marcel in it D: Awesome job otherwise :3 XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though it was a bit hard to follow because of the multiple scene changes. Like what you did with Leo in this one. Great job. Delta327 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been reading for a while, but wanted to say Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() permet de mélanger vous doit nous? :D c'était un merveilleux chapitre! maintenir le bon travail! Try figuring THAT out from my wondrous French classes! XD Nah, here's the translation: Lets mix it up a bit shall we? :D That was a wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh-em-gee-goodness! This chapter was great! "Field Empathy" and "RCA" (teehee) are really good writers! I can't wait for chapter 29 to be written! I'm so excited to find or what happens next! Keep up the great work in writing the story. I love this story and I love you guys! (Haha)(silly) :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay glad to see you update! Good chapter, can't wait to see the climax to this soon :) your story is slightly inspiring me to make some new oc's and possibly my own superhero type story xD look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tyrantrum is a great pokemon. Great defense and attack, good fossil pokemon in general. I kinda miss John on the team, but I'm interested in seeing what Dani can do. All in all, good chapter. Keep on writing Delta327 |