| Reviews for Athena (Book One of the Athena Trilogy) |
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   delta327 chapter 11 . 8/3/2013 I'm guessing I'm going to see Silhouette more in the story? Keep up the good work. Delta327 |
| delta327 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013 Just stumbled onto this. Very picturesque descriptions of things. I didn't expect this to be a superhero story, but more of an Percy Jackson style story. Mainly because of the title, and the mention of "Hero" in the story description. Nonetheless, I'm liking the vibe this story is giving me. Keep on writing. Delta327 |
| The Dark Squire chapter 21 . 7/31/2013 I. Love. This. Story. OH MY GOD |
| Enabalina chapter 21 . 7/30/2013 Ok, I've waited for almost 2 weeks for someone to update a story... And let me just say... JENDJDBJSJDWHJSIDNEJDBEJDBDHJSDBJDICBRJDHHFJRJFNFI RFNJRJFJRUFHFJFNFCHRNFJJR! *voice becomes muffled* Brooke: As you can tell... Silent has been on a sugar high... Pretty much all day... Yeah... Silent: *bites Brooke's hand* Brooke: OW! WHAT THE HECK?! Silent: I can BREATH now! |
| Dark Squire chapter 21 . 7/30/2013 I'm loving this so much! |
| Marguerite Grimmett chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 This is pretty good writing! I must say, the part where she kills him is a bit gruesome... But I like the chapter, because the whole thing tells us information about the character, and doesn't seem like an info-dump. Good! :) |
| Enabalina chapter 20 . 7/28/2013 OMG DHDBDJEJSIWNXHFNDIWKXHEHDJSDEJDHDIEJEGDJDUE HOLY MOTHER OF CHRIST I LOVE YOU! First off. I love how they know that Owen has powers, it creates more DRAMA! Second. I can't WAIT until Marcel get another moment :D my heart is singing! Thirdly... Um, Third-ly? Oh whatever... Third of all, I Love the Richen/SpeedArcher pairing! It's almost as good as *mouth gets covered by Marcel's hand* Marcel: She was about to say NOTHING! Except for a Spoiler! *rolls eyes* Wjrnfevurj (a muffled Whatever) |
| Northrnstar chapter 20 . 7/26/2013 Great chapter! Learned a lot about the justice system which was cool and as always I adore Jesse! He is adorable! And I love how much Owen denies her love for Richard! It makes me smile |
| BizbethdA chapter 7 . 7/9/2013 So since I'm taking forever I'll let you have my critiques now. . . I think there are gaps for the aging process, and some of the scenes don't read out clearly... All the characters can get confusing I feel you need to repeat names and more visuals so the reader can create a distinct image to relate that character to... Also I can't quite understand what the plot is or that it's written all I can gather is that she was an assassin now she's trying to become a hero? But I don't where the story is going, as the author you know what will happen and who's talking how all the little details are important but as the reader without a plot, or a pull the little details just become monotonous because we don't know what we are looking forward to, what we are waiting to find out. This is just my opinion on it so far I'm gonna just to read some more of it when I have the time :) |
| Northrnstar chapter 19 . 6/30/2013 I missed this story! It's been so long! I'm glad it's back! Haha the Chapter messed with my emotions but I absolutely loved every second of it! the part between Owen and Ray at the beginning of the chapter was so sad! I mean poor Owen not having anyone there for her until now! I like her having ray as a father figure! It's like for the first time she finally has a home The parts between Richard and Owen were adorable as always and I loved their flickering (bickering/flirting :p) seriously too cute and super funny! I was actually laughing out loud at their awkwardness! And omg the ending took me by surprise! I knew it was going to be coming at some point, but wow! Talk about a good Clift hanger! And to include a "man period" or not to include a "man period" now that is the question! Whether it is nobler to write the new body function or stay with in the reality of the body. Haha either or, would have been funny with it, yet it was still funny without it :p |
| Enabalina chapter 19 . 6/29/2013 OHMYGOSHTHISWASTHEFREAKINGBESTESTCHAPTERINTHEENTIR EUNIVERSE! I have 3 things to say: (1) Ermygersh... Hehehe Marcel (inside joke w/ RCA) (2) (This is Marcel) YUSS! I HAVE FINALLY BECOME SATISFIED! (3) Ok RCA? I freaking love you right now, you are the best person here on the Internet. Thank u for ending (u know what) I am greatful and releaved :) I love u to pieces! |
| Sarah from TAP chapter 2 . 6/22/2013 Well...that was certainly interesting...he is very HARSH! Wow...but that was still a really good chapter! Good job! |
| Sarahheyp chapter 1 . 6/22/2013 WOW! This is awesome! Except for the parts I told u about but now they are more understandable because u explained them so they are good too! I am impressed with the quality of writing! It seems so professional! I could never write like this! Hahaha! Anyway, keep up the awesome writing Jess! Bye bye! |
| Northrnstar chapter 18 . 5/22/2013 That chapter was epic! (Sorry I took long to review, lol I'm vacaing in the Dominican! :D) anyways this has to be my new favorite chapter! Omg there was so much tension shipping in it! It got so intense and I love how Richard knows now, and the flirting that went |
| Enabalina chapter 18 . 5/22/2013 Woah 0-0 Did NOT expect that! 0-0 Woah... Awesome... |