I absolutely loved this chapter. But, I must say, I really want to know who wins the competition! So please, for the love of chocolate, update!

Whoa. Likin' how this story is turning out :D especially how you introduced each character and Owen's transition from a harmless kid to a cold blooded killer. And then her interaction with each character *magnifique* Can't wait for more

I honestly am surprised with how much you can write. I love this story. Please update soon!

I absolutely loved the chapter. To me, it seems perfect as it is. I hope you update soon.

I loved it. I hope you update real soon.

This is an awesome story. While I don't really like all the violence, I have to say it is one of the best I have read in my short life. I hope you update quickly-like!

Well done I don't usually see many first-person stories that interest me, but this has a lot of potential. Awesome job on introducing the characters Update soon

Very good Prologue. sounds promising.