Reviews for Just Say Hi
Ashley Eon chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Aww, Ennieee :)

I read the other review. I'd say that to make this style of poem even more effective, try establishing a... I think it's called a meter? It's a certain rhythm or number of syllables per line. Usually there's a pattern, like 5-7-5 for haiku, 6-6-4-4-6 for some limericks, or even 10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10-10 for sonnets. Just a thought, and I caught the thought behind it :)
Naver chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Hmm.. I think it has a nice message, but I don't like the rhyming starting and breaking (just a thing I guess) Good job, continue. :)