Reviews for The Lock Down Squad: Revolution
flyingchicken99 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Cool story! I really like your style of writing! I would love to see some background for your characters in your next chapters, and hopefully some background on the setting as a whole! I defiantly think this story will be awesome, if you develop it well! I'll check back soon, but in the meantime, maybe we could trade stories? Feedback for feedback? Thanks! Great start!