|Reviews for Attempting Love|
| Allele chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
| TinyLaughAlot chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Grrrrr! Its a good poem and all but I know what you are talking about and I feel like a father!
| Naver chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hmm.. when I read it, it seemed "choppy" ... though I may just of imagined it.. I like the lines
"I can feel my heart bruising and scaring
And freezing over"
I see a block of ice being slit in half, very nice imagery. :)