Reviews for Supernatural
ThinkPi chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I like your taste in words. You have a colorful vocabulary that helps to express your ideas well. While some people struggle with word choice it seems your only struggle is with structure (only noting from your profile!).

I've read this and a few other pieces of your poetry but I have to say this one is pretty solid! I get annoyed quickly with repetition being abused but for this one it wasn't all too bad I'll admit, it worked well for the poem. I like the alliteration, and my favorite part would be "Ghosts in the graveyard, whispers of the dead, silent wails, shaking their heads." Besides the Grammar Nazi in me wanting to point out comma splicing and run-on sentences I would say this is an overall cool piece of poetry MadClaire, especially for your first "angstless" poem published :)
Legkicker chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I liked it! It was cool how it transitioned from happy to evil - starting with fairies and ending with witches.

This is your first poem? It's very good, hope to see you do more soon!

- Legkicker

(P.S. Welcome to FictionPress!)