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| ThinkPi chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
I really like this one, surprisingly. I thought it'd be short and wordy but much like a haiku it does well to outline one single image. Not many people do that well! As I've noticed in other poems you should try hard to proofread them for grammar mistakes as I trip through your lines sometimes because of them. In poetry it makes a significant difference. This one only had one typo, and that would be the word through accidentally written as though.
I really like that third line. Your style of imagery is unique and once you can get your ideas to paper smoothly I'm sure you'll be writing stellar poetry.