I love the comparison to a vase. Beautiful and fragile and breakable. Nice. Write on!

Lovely... :) MF

It's like I can almost touch that deepening emotion and feeling you pressed into each and every word. This, is poetry.

This remind me of jadded people,I love the lines.. " The old glass vase that sits on my side table –
Cracked in all the wrong places." So short and meaningful, continue to write. :)

I loved this poem, I thought it had such a brilliant tone to it, that was almost frail and sad like the poem described. It was short, and I think that if there had been more it would of said too much, so this was the perfect length. Just perfect all round really.